Armory and Latest Log

So as the title stated im wanting to know if you can see anything i'm missing that would help increase my damage done. I'm not a member of a hardcore raiding guild so a lot of options aren't open to me yet gear wise. I dont want gear to be the reason i'm not performing optimally though. If any of the upper echelon dps warriors would be willing to drop me a few pointers it'd be appreciated. The log that I linked I DC'd for all of about 30s of the loot ship encounter. I wasnt the one who posted the log though so it's complete.